I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Last term we have been writing about a bull.We first had to take a piece of paper that has one sentence about a bull and we had to turn it into a story. what do you think about my bull story please leave a comment.
Hi Zainab, I like the way you added a lot of describing words to your story. Maybe next time check your punctuation and your I's. This reminds me of bull's. Great job!
Hi Zainab,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you added a lot of describing words to your story. Maybe next time check your punctuation and your I's.
This reminds me of bull's.
Great job!