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Wednesday, May 1, 2019

The Red Ball

This week we have been reading the red ball with Miss McCormick


Blooms task
Knowledge A {KA}
1.May
2.Ida
3.fairy
4.all the fairies
Comprehension A [CA]

May
Ida
Best at everything
Sporty
scared
Jealous
Scared
Good at remembering words.

Application A [AA]
1.I am wicked
2.i am mean
3.i am scary
4.i am not normal
5.i have tomato red hair
What am I?
I am the fairy in the story



Analysing b [ANB]

May
Ida
Good at sport
Good at everything
Not that brave
Not that good at sport
Not as good at everything
Really brave

New idas c [NIC]
When Ida and May came back they ran home not looking back.they hugged their mum so tight their mum couldn't breathe.When they both stop holding mum they hugged each and said sorry.Ida was crying so hard and tears was falling everywhere.May said “it’s okay we are back home and in our house”said May and it all ended with a huge hug.

Evaluating Evaluation A [EA]
I would rate this text a 10 out of 10.
I gave it a 10 because it has a lot of detail and also it was a really interesting story.
Rate=10

Zainab :)


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